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Y11.4 Vocabulary for Impact Synonyms

Calculators not allowed · about 60 minutes

Total Marks

Name: _______________________________ Date: ____ / ____ / ______

Answer ALL questions. Show all your working.

The word groups below share a similar core meaning (denotation), but each word carries a different connotation. For each group, identify the word with the most POSITIVE connotation.

(a)(describing someone thin)(1)

A) slender
B) skinny
C) gaunt

(b)(describing someone talkative)(1)

A) garrulous
B) chatty
C) gossipy

(c)(describing someone careful with money)(1)

A) frugal
B) stingy
C) tight-fisted

(d)(describing someone widely known)(1)

A) renowned
B) notorious
C) infamous

(e)(describing someone brave)(1)

A) courageous
B) reckless
C) foolhardy

(Total for Question 1 is 5 marks)

Writers vary the verb 'said' to give the reader more precise information about how something was spoken. Use this word bank to answer the questions below.

Word bank
whispered
murmured
said
exclaimed
shouted
bellowed

(a)Which word from the bank suggests someone spoke so quietly they could barely be heard?(1)

whispered
murmured
said
exclaimed
shouted
bellowed

(b)Which word from the bank suggests someone spoke suddenly, with surprise or strong emotion?(1)

whispered
murmured
said
exclaimed
shouted
bellowed

(c)Which word from the bank suggests someone spoke loudly enough to be heard across a large distance or over noise?(1)

whispered
murmured
said
exclaimed
shouted
bellowed

(d)Which word from the bank is the most neutral, giving no extra information about volume or tone?(1)

whispered
murmured
said
exclaimed
shouted
bellowed

(Total for Question 2 is 4 marks)

Each group of four words below contains three true synonyms and one word that does NOT belong. Identify the odd one out in each group.

(a)(1)

A) happy
B) joyful
C) elated
D) miserable

(b)(1)

A) enormous
B) huge
C) gigantic
D) tiny

(c)(1)

A) rapid
B) swift
C) quick
D) sluggish

(d)(1)

A) generous
B) charitable
C) giving
D) selfish

(e)(1)

A) beautiful
B) gorgeous
C) stunning
D) plain

(Total for Question 3 is 5 marks)

For each pair of words below, identify the word that is more FORMAL in register.

(a)(1)

A) buy
B) purchase

(b)(1)

A) kids
B) children

(c)(1)

A) get
B) obtain

(d)(1)

A) start
B) commence

(e)(1)

A) big
B) substantial

(Total for Question 4 is 5 marks)

Read each short extract below and explain the effect of the underlined word choice on the reader.

(a)'The old dog no longer bounded across the field; now it SHUFFLED, pausing every few steps to catch its breath.' Explain the effect of the word 'shuffled'.(2)

(b)'She did not just disagree with the plan; she DETONATED, her fury filling the small office within seconds.' Explain the effect of the word 'detonated'.(2)

(Total for Question 5 is 4 marks)

Classify each word below according to its connotation: positive, negative or neutral.

(a)vibrant(1)

positive
negative
neutral

(b)gaudy(1)

positive
negative
neutral

(c)unusual(1)

positive
negative
neutral

(d)childish(1)

positive
negative
neutral

(e)youthful(1)

positive
negative
neutral

(f)average(1)

positive
negative
neutral

(Total for Question 6 is 6 marks)

Choose the word that has the most precise and impactful effect in each sentence.

(a)The wind ___ through the narrow streets, rattling the shutters.(1)

A) went
B) moved
C) howled
D) was

(b)After the accident, the driver's hands ___ uncontrollably.(1)

A) moved
B) trembled
C) went
D) were

(c)The crowd ___ forward the moment the gates opened.(1)

A) went
B) surged
C) walked
D) moved

(d)He ___ his homework onto the desk, clearly exhausted.(1)

A) put
B) placed
C) dumped
D) had

(e)The smell of fresh bread ___ from the bakery door.(1)

A) came
B) wafted
C) went
D) was

(Total for Question 7 is 5 marks)

For each description below, choose the word that would best create the stated effect on the reader.

(a)Which word best conveys menace when describing a shadow moving across a wall?(1)

A) crept
B) walked
C) moved
D) went

(b)Which word best conveys admiration when describing a sunset?(1)

A) big
B) nice
C) breathtaking
D) okay

(c)Which word best conveys gentle humour when describing a clumsy puppy?(1)

A) bumbled
B) marched
C) glided
D) stalked

(d)Which word best conveys sadness when describing an empty house?(1)

A) quiet
B) forlorn
C) big
D) nice

(Total for Question 8 is 4 marks)

Replace the vague, overused word shown in brackets in each sentence with a single word that is more precise and has more impact. Any suitable word that fits the meaning and register of the sentence is acceptable.

(a)The film was [nice].(1)

(b)She [walked] into the room.(1)

(c)It was a [big] storm.(1)

(d)He felt [bad] about what he had done.(1)

(e)The food tasted [good].(1)

(Total for Question 9 is 5 marks)

Rewrite the following sentence so that it has more impact, replacing the three vague words shown in capitals with more precise, ambitious vocabulary. Do not change the overall meaning of the sentence.

'The BIG dog WENT across the NICE garden.'

(Total for Question 10 is 3 marks)

In each sentence below, a near-synonym has been chosen that clashes with the surrounding meaning, undermining the intended impact. Identify the wrongly used word and replace it with a word that fits the context.

(a)'The chef was known for his stingy portions, always piling generous helpings onto every plate, and diners left delighted.'(2)

(b)'The toddler was scolded for being so inquisitive, staring at every stranger's shopping and asking rude questions about their bags.'(2)

(c)'The retired general was celebrated as a reckless leader, praised for his careful, measured decisions that saved countless lives.'(2)

(d)'The negotiator was criticised for being far too assertive, quietly agreeing to every demand without argument.'(2)

(Total for Question 11 is 8 marks)

Rewrite the paragraph below, replacing each instance of 'said' with a more precise verb that matches the tone and meaning of what is being said. You may make small adjustments so your new verb fits the sentence, but do not change the meaning of what anyone says.

'"Where have you been?" said Mum. "I got lost," said Tom. "You always get lost," said Mum, laughing. "It's not funny," said Tom, but he was smiling too.'

(Total for Question 12 is 6 marks)

The paragraph below is meant to celebrate a town's summer festival, but one word choice clashes with this positive tone. Identify the word and explain why it clashes, then give a replacement that fits the intended celebratory mood.

'The high street was packed with families, live music drifted from the bandstand, and the smell of fresh doughnuts hung in the air. Even the elderly librarian, usually so reserved, was seen dancing with an infestation of pure delight.'

(Total for Question 13 is 3 marks)

Write one original sentence for each word below, using the word correctly and in a context that shows you understand its precise meaning and connotation.

(a)meticulous(2)

(b)relentless(2)

(c)exquisite(2)

(Total for Question 14 is 6 marks)

Use the word bank below to help you write 2 to 3 sentences describing a busy market. You must use at least FOUR words from the bank, and you must NOT use any of the banned words listed.

Impact word bank
bustling
aromatic
jostled
haggled
vibrant
cacophony
weaved
overflowing

Banned words: nice, good, big, lots, went, walked, said, very.

(Total for Question 15 is 8 marks)

Write a short descriptive paragraph (80 to 120 words) about a stormy coastline. Choose your vocabulary deliberately for impact, avoiding vague, overused words. Underline FIVE ambitious vocabulary choices in your answer.

(Total for Question 16 is 12 marks)

Read the two versions of the same idea below.

Bland version: 'The old car was noisy and slow.'

Vivid version: 'The old car groaned and juddered along the lane, wheezing like a tired animal that had long since given up hope of a rest.'

Evaluate how effectively the vocabulary choices in the vivid version create impact for the reader, compared with the bland version.

(Total for Question 17 is 8 marks)

Write a short persuasive paragraph (60 to 90 words) urging your school to reduce food waste in the canteen. Choose your vocabulary deliberately for persuasive impact, and avoid vague, overused words.

(Total for Question 18 is 10 marks)

Mark scheme · Y11.4 Vocabulary for Impact Synonyms

Question 1

(a) B1 A) slender
(a) Answer: A
(b) B1 B) chatty
(b) Answer: B
(c) B1 A) frugal
(c) Answer: A
(d) B1 A) renowned
(d) Answer: A
(e) B1 A) courageous
(e) Answer: A

Question 2

(a) B1 whispered
(a) Answer: whispered
(b) B1 exclaimed
(b) Answer: exclaimed
(c) B1 bellowed
(c) Answer: bellowed
(d) B1 said
(d) Answer: said

Question 3

(a) B1 D) miserable
(a) Answer: D
(b) B1 D) tiny
(b) Answer: D
(c) B1 D) sluggish
(c) Answer: D
(d) B1 D) selfish
(d) Answer: D
(e) B1 D) plain
(e) Answer: D

Question 4

(a) B1 B) purchase
(a) Answer: B
(b) B1 B) children
(b) Answer: B
(c) B1 B) obtain
(c) Answer: B
(d) B1 B) commence
(d) Answer: B
(e) B1 B) substantial
(e) Answer: B

Question 5

(a) 1 mark identifies a straightforward idea, e.g. the dog moves slowly, weakly or with dragging steps (oe)
(a) 1 mark develops this with reference to connotations and contrast, e.g. 'shuffled' contrasts sharply with the earlier 'bounded', suggesting the dog's age and weakness, and creating a sense of sad decline in the reader (oe)
(a) Answer: 'Shuffled' suggests slow, dragging, effortful movement, and its contrast with the earlier 'bounded' emphasises the dog's age and physical decline, creating a sense of sadness in the reader.
(b) 1 mark identifies a straightforward idea, e.g. her reaction was sudden and explosive (oe)
(b) 1 mark develops this with reference to connotations, e.g. 'detonated' compares her anger to a bomb exploding, suggesting an overwhelming, uncontrollable reaction that is far more dramatic and violent than simply 'got angry' (oe)
(b) Answer: 'Detonated' compares her reaction to an explosion, suggesting a sudden, overwhelming and uncontrollable outburst of fury that feels far more dramatic and violent than a plain phrase such as 'got angry'.

Question 6

(a) B1 positive
(a) Answer: positive
(b) B1 negative
(b) Answer: negative
(c) B1 neutral
(c) Answer: neutral
(d) B1 negative
(d) Answer: negative
(e) B1 positive
(e) Answer: positive
(f) B1 neutral
(f) Answer: neutral

Question 7

(a) B1 C) howled
(a) Answer: C
(b) B1 B) trembled
(b) Answer: B
(c) B1 B) surged
(c) Answer: B
(d) B1 C) dumped
(d) Answer: C
(e) B1 B) wafted
(e) Answer: B

Question 8

(a) B1 A) crept
(a) Answer: A
(b) B1 C) breathtaking
(b) Answer: C
(c) B1 A) bumbled
(c) Answer: A
(d) B1 B) forlorn
(d) Answer: B

Question 9

(a) B1 any single word that is more precise/impactful than 'nice' and fits the sentence, e.g. captivating, gripping, mesmerising (oe)
(a) Answer: e.g. captivating / gripping / mesmerising
(b) B1 any single word that is more precise/impactful than 'walked' and fits the sentence, e.g. strode, marched, crept (oe)
(b) Answer: e.g. strode / marched / crept
(c) B1 any single word that is more precise/impactful than 'big' and fits the sentence, e.g. ferocious, violent, relentless (oe)
(c) Answer: e.g. ferocious / violent / relentless
(d) B1 any single word that is more precise/impactful than 'bad' and fits the sentence, e.g. remorseful, ashamed, guilty (oe)
(d) Answer: e.g. remorseful / ashamed / guilty
(e) B1 any single word that is more precise/impactful than 'good' and fits the sentence, e.g. delicious, exquisite, mouth-watering (oe)
(e) Answer: e.g. delicious / exquisite / mouth-watering

Question 10

B1 replaces 'BIG' with a more precise, impactful adjective that fits the sentence, e.g. enormous, hulking, powerful (oe)
B1 replaces 'WENT' with a more precise, impactful verb that fits the sentence, e.g. bounded, thundered, loped (oe)
B1 replaces 'NICE' with a more precise, impactful adjective that fits the sentence, e.g. immaculate, manicured, sun-dappled (oe)
Answer: e.g. 'The hulking dog bounded across the immaculate garden.'

Question 11

(a) B1 identifies 'stingy' as the wrongly used word, since it clashes with 'generous helpings' and 'diners left delighted'
(a) B1 gives a suitable replacement that fits the positive context, e.g. generous, lavish, famed (oe)
(a) Answer: 'stingy' should be replaced with a word such as 'generous' or 'lavish'.
(b) B1 identifies 'inquisitive' as the wrongly used word, since it clashes with 'scolded' and 'rude questions'
(b) B1 gives a suitable replacement that fits the critical context, e.g. nosy, prying (oe)
(b) Answer: 'inquisitive' should be replaced with a word such as 'nosy' or 'prying'.
(c) B1 identifies 'reckless' as the wrongly used word, since it clashes with 'careful, measured decisions' and being 'celebrated'
(c) B1 gives a suitable replacement that fits the admiring context, e.g. courageous, bold (oe)
(c) Answer: 'reckless' should be replaced with a word such as 'courageous' or 'bold'.
(d) B1 identifies 'assertive' as the wrongly used word, since it clashes with 'quietly agreeing... without argument'
(d) B1 gives a suitable replacement that fits the critical context, e.g. passive, submissive (oe)
(d) Answer: 'assertive' should be replaced with a word such as 'passive' or 'submissive'.

Question 12

Level 0 (0): No accurate variation of 'said'; verbs remain unchanged or new errors are introduced.
Level 1 (1-2): One or two instances of 'said' replaced with an appropriate, precise verb.
Level 2 (3-4): Most instances of 'said' replaced with appropriate, precise verbs, with tone generally consistent with the dialogue.
Level 3 (5-6): All four instances of 'said' replaced with precise, well-chosen verbs that consistently match the tone and meaning of the dialogue, in fluent Standard English.
Indicative content:
- Mum's first line is a genuine question, so a verb such as 'demanded' or 'asked' fits, showing mild concern or impatience.
- Tom's admission suits a verb such as 'admitted' or 'confessed', reflecting that he is owning up to something.
- Mum's second line is described as accompanied by laughing, so a verb such as 'teased' or 'chuckled' fits the playful tone.
- Tom's final line is a mild protest, so a verb such as 'protested' or 'objected' fits, especially alongside the detail that he was smiling.
- The overall rewrite should read fluently and preserve the warm, affectionate tone of the exchange between Mum and Tom.

Question 13

B1 identifies 'infestation' as the word that clashes with the celebratory tone
B1 explains that 'infestation' has strong negative connotations (associated with pests, disease or unwelcome invasion), which is unsuitable for a joyful description (oe)
B1 gives a suitable replacement that fits the celebratory tone, e.g. an outburst, a wave, a rush (of pure delight) (oe)
Answer: 'Infestation' is the clashing word; it carries negative connotations of pests or disease, which does not fit a joyful scene. A suitable replacement would be 'an outburst of pure delight' or 'a wave of pure delight'.

Question 14

(a) 1 mark the word is used with the correct meaning (extremely careful and precise about detail) and appropriate register
(a) 1 mark the sentence provides clear context that demonstrates understanding of the word's connotation, e.g. describing careful, painstaking work (oe)
(a) Answer: e.g. 'The jeweller examined each diamond with meticulous care, checking for the tiniest flaw.'
(b) 1 mark the word is used with the correct meaning (continuing without stopping or weakening) and appropriate register
(b) 1 mark the sentence provides clear context that demonstrates understanding of the word's connotation, e.g. describing something unstoppable or exhausting (oe)
(b) Answer: e.g. 'The relentless rain battered the tent all night, showing no sign of easing.'
(c) 1 mark the word is used with the correct meaning (extremely beautiful or finely made) and appropriate register
(c) 1 mark the sentence provides clear context that demonstrates understanding of the word's connotation, e.g. describing delicate craftsmanship or beauty (oe)
(c) Answer: e.g. 'The bride wore an exquisite lace veil, embroidered by hand with tiny silver flowers.'

Question 15

Level 1 (1-2): Simple description with little or no use of the word bank; banned words may be present.
Level 2 (3-4): Some use of the word bank (fewer than four words), with some vivid detail; occasional reliance on vague or banned vocabulary.
Level 3 (5-6): At least four word bank words used accurately and appropriately; description is generally vivid and avoids banned words.
Level 4 (7-8): At least four word bank words used precisely and effectively for sensory impact, seamlessly integrated into fluent, controlled sentences with no banned words.
Indicative content:
- Sensory detail combining sound (cacophony), smell (aromatic) and movement (jostled, weaved) creates an immersive impression of the market.
- Word bank vocabulary is integrated grammatically rather than simply listed, e.g. 'the bustling market' or 'traders haggled loudly'.
- No banned words (nice, good, big, lots, went, walked, said, very) appear anywhere in the response.
- Sentences vary in structure rather than following a repetitive pattern, keeping the description engaging.

Question 16

Vocabulary for effect (AO5)
- Level 1 (1-2): Simple, limited vocabulary; little evidence of deliberate word choice for effect.
- Level 2 (3-4): Some attempt to choose vocabulary for effect, with mixed success; some vague or overused words remain.
- Level 3 (5-6): A range of increasingly ambitious vocabulary chosen for sensory or emotional effect, with generally consistent success.
- Level 4 (7-8): Sophisticated, carefully crafted vocabulary sustained throughout, with precise and varied word choices that create a strong, controlled impact on the reader.
Accuracy and control (AO6)
- Level 1 (1): Limited accuracy; frequent errors interrupt meaning.
- Level 2 (2-3): Mostly accurate spelling and punctuation, with a reasonable range of sentence structures.
- Level 3 (4): Consistently accurate spelling, punctuation and a varied range of sentence structures used for effect.

Question 17

Level 1 (1-2): Simple, undeveloped evaluation, with little or no reference to specific vocabulary choices.
Level 2 (3-4): Some relevant evaluation of vocabulary choices, with limited supporting reference to the text.
Level 3 (5-6): Clear, developed evaluation of specific vocabulary choices and their effect, supported by well-chosen references to both versions.
Level 4 (7-8): Detailed and perceptive evaluation, exploring precisely how each vocabulary choice contributes to impact, with sustained and justified critical judgement.
Indicative content:
- 'groaned' and 'juddered' personify the car with sounds and movements associated with pain or age, far more evocative than the flat adjectives 'noisy' and 'slow'.
- The simile 'wheezing like a tired animal' extends the personification, comparing the car's condition to a living creature, which builds sympathy and vivid sensory impact.
- 'given up hope of a rest' develops the personification further, adding a sense of weary resignation absent from the bland version.
- A balanced evaluation might note that the vivid version's sustained personification (groaned, juddered, wheezing, given up hope) works cumulatively, rather than any single word carrying the impact alone.
- The strongest evaluations reach a clear, justified judgement about effectiveness, rather than simply describing the differences between the two versions.

Question 18

Level 1 (1-3): Simple, limited vocabulary; little sense of persuasive purpose or deliberate word choice.
Level 2 (4-6): Some ambitious vocabulary chosen for persuasive effect, with mixed success; some vague or overused words remain.
Level 3 (7-8): A range of precise, persuasive vocabulary used with generally consistent success, supported by accurate Standard English.
Level 4 (9-10): Sophisticated, carefully controlled vocabulary sustained throughout for maximum persuasive impact, matched to a confident, consistently accurate persuasive register.
Indicative content:
- Emotive, precise vocabulary (e.g. squandered, staggering, needless) creates a stronger persuasive impact than vague evaluative words such as 'bad' or 'a lot'.
- Rhetorical techniques (rhetorical questions, direct address, the rule of three) work alongside ambitious vocabulary to strengthen the persuasive effect.
- A confident, clearly stated call to action avoids repetition of overused vocabulary across the paragraph.
- Consistent avoidance of vague, overused words (nice, good, bad, big, a lot, went, said, very) throughout the response.
- Accurate, controlled Standard English supports rather than undermines the persuasive vocabulary choices.

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