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EP.E1 Comprehension: Fiction

GL ASSESSMENT / CSSE 11+ Entrance English (GL Assessment / CSSE style) · Calculators not allowed · about 75 minutes
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Name: _______________________________    Date: ____ / ____ / ______
Answer ALL questions. Show all your working.

The Keeper's Light

Source written for Revision Library (original, copyright-free). Fictional narrative created for 11+ comprehension practice.

Amara Okafor had promised herself she would not be afraid of the lighthouse, not today. Yet as she climbed the last few steps of the cliff path, the white tower seemed to lean over her like a question she could not answer.

'You are sure it is empty?' she called back to her cousin, Rhys, who was struggling with the picnic bag some way behind.

'Empty since 1987,' he puffed. 'Grandad said the keeper just vanished one winter. Left his boots by the door and never came back for them.'

Amara did not like the sound of that at all, but she kept walking. The wind off the North Sea tugged at her coat and filled her ears with a low, steady roar, as though the water itself were breathing. Above her, gulls wheeled and cried, sharp as knives against the grey sky.

The lighthouse door hung crooked on one rusted hinge. Amara pushed it, and it groaned open with a sound like an old man clearing his throat. Inside, the air was cold and smelled of salt and something else, something green and forgotten, like the inside of a shell.

'Race you to the top,' said Rhys, dropping the picnic bag with a thud and darting past her onto the spiral staircase.

Amara hesitated at the bottom step. The staircase curled upward into darkness, iron rail cold beneath her palm. Something about the silence pressed on her chest, heavy as a held breath. Still, she would not be the one left behind. She began to climb.

Round and round the stairs wound, past a narrow window here, a peeling poster there, faded so much that only the ghost of red letters remained: DANGER, it seemed to say, or perhaps DO NOT. Amara's footsteps echoed strangely, doubling and trebling until it sounded as though a whole crowd climbed with her.

At the top, Rhys stood at the great glass lantern room, his breath fogging the salt streaked panes. 'Come and see,' he said, and his voice had gone quiet in a way that was not like him at all.

Amara joined him at the glass. Below, the sea stretched grey and enormous, folding over itself in slow, patient waves. The old lens of the lighthouse still stood in the centre of the room, an immense structure of glass rings, dusty and cracked, but somehow still catching what little light there was and scattering it into a hundred small rainbows across the floor.

'There,' Rhys whispered, pointing.

On the dusty floorboards beside the lens sat a pair of boots, cracked with age, laces long since rotted to threads. Beside them, half buried in dust, lay an open logbook, its pages rippled with damp. Amara crouched down, hardly daring to breathe, and read the last entry, written in careful, looping handwriting.

15th November. Storm still rising. Light holding, just. If anyone reads this, tell my sister the garden needs pruning before frost. I will not leave my post while the light still turns.

There was no entry after that.

Amara sat back on her heels. Outside, the wind had risen, and the old lens gave a faint, complaining creak, as though it remembered turning once, long ago, for a keeper who never came back down.

'Do you think he's still here?' Rhys asked, and for once he was not joking.

Amara looked at the boots, empty and waiting by the door, and did not answer straight away. Then she reached out and, very gently, turned the great lens a single inch, so that for a moment the whole room span with scattered, trembling light.

'I think,' she said slowly, 'that some lights are not meant to go out.'

1
Look at the first three paragraphs of the extract, from 'Amara Okafor had promised herself' to 'never came back for them.'
(a)Give one word from these paragraphs that means 'breathed heavily, especially after physical effort'.(1)
(b)Give one word from paragraph 5 that means 'twisted or bent, not straight'.(1)
(Total for Question 1 is 2 marks)
2
Are the following statements about the opening of the extract True or False? Write True or False for each.
(a)Amara is Rhys's cousin.(1)
  • True
  • False
(b)The lighthouse keeper vanished in the summer.(1)
  • True
  • False
(c)The lighthouse door had two working hinges.(1)
  • True
  • False
(Total for Question 2 is 3 marks)
3
Number the following events 1 to 4 to show the order in which they happen in the extract: 'Amara pushes open the crooked door', 'Rhys runs ahead up the spiral staircase', 'Amara and Rhys read the last entry in the logbook', 'Amara turns the great lens a single inch'.
(Total for Question 3 is 4 marks)
4
Look at the paragraph beginning 'The lighthouse door hung crooked...'
(a)Find and copy one phrase that shows the air inside the lighthouse smelled unpleasant or strange.(1)
(b)Find and copy one phrase that shows the door was difficult to open.(1)
(Total for Question 4 is 2 marks)
5
Re-read the paragraph beginning 'Amara did not like the sound of that at all...'. What does this paragraph suggest about how Amara is feeling as she approaches the lighthouse? Use evidence from the text to support your answer.
(Total for Question 5 is 3 marks)
6
Look at the opening sentence of the extract: 'the white tower seemed to lean over her like a question she could not answer.' Explain how the writer's use of language here creates a sense of unease. Refer closely to the language in your answer.
(Total for Question 6 is 4 marks)
7
Re-read the paragraph beginning 'Round and round the stairs wound...'. How does the writer use structure and description in this paragraph to build tension?
(Total for Question 7 is 4 marks)
8
'Come and see,' he said, and his voice had gone quiet in a way that was not like him at all.' What does this sentence suggest about Rhys, and about what he has seen? Explain your answer.
(Total for Question 8 is 3 marks)
9
Choose the option closest in meaning to each word as it is used in the extract.
(a)'immense' (describing the lens) is closest in meaning to:(1)
  • A) tiny
  • B) huge
  • C) fragile
  • D) ancient
(b)'complaining' (describing the creak of the lens) suggests the sound was:(1)
  • A) cheerful
  • B) discontented or irritated-sounding
  • C) completely silent
  • D) musical
(c)'trembling' (describing the light) suggests the light was:(1)
  • A) shaking and unsteady
  • B) bright and perfectly steady
  • C) completely dark
  • D) warm and orange
(Total for Question 9 is 3 marks)
10
Look at the phrase 'an immense structure of glass rings'. Explain why 'immense' is a more effective word choice than the plain word 'big' in this context.
(Total for Question 10 is 2 marks)
11
List four separate details the writer gives about the state of the lens and the objects found beside it in the lantern room.
(Total for Question 11 is 4 marks)
12
Look at the closing dialogue: '"Do you think he's still here?" Rhys asked... "I think," she said slowly, "that some lights are not meant to go out."' Explain what this exchange adds to the reader's understanding of Amara's character.
(Total for Question 12 is 3 marks)
13
In your own words, summarise what Amara and Rhys discover in the lantern room and why it might be significant.
(Total for Question 13 is 4 marks)
14
Compare how Amara feels about the lighthouse at the beginning of the extract with how she feels by the end. Use evidence from across the text to support your ideas.
(Total for Question 14 is 5 marks)
15
A reader said, 'This extract creates a powerful sense of mystery right until the final line.' To what extent do you agree? Support your response with detailed reference to the text, including the writer's use of language and structure.
(Total for Question 15 is 8 marks)
16
Using the lighthouse in the extract as your starting point, write the opening of a story describing a mysterious or abandoned place. You may continue Amara and Rhys's story, or write about a completely different place of your own invention. Write between one and two sides.
(Total for Question 16 is 16 marks)
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