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Y10.4 Persuasive Language Structures

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Name: _______________________________ Date: ____ / ____ / ______

Answer ALL questions. Show all your working.

Save Our Meadow Park (campaign leaflet extract)

Source written for Revision Library (original, copyright-free). Written specifically for this worksheet as a short persuasive campaign leaflet extract for language and structure practice.

Close your eyes and picture Meadow Park without its oak trees, its duck pond or its rusty old swings. Can you imagine your children growing up without a single blade of grass to run across? We cannot. For over sixty years, Meadow Park has been the beating heart of our community, and now the council wants to concrete over it for a car park.

Yes, the council says a car park would ease congestion on the high street. We understand the concern. But is a few extra parking spaces really worth losing the only green space for streets around? Local families use Meadow Park every single day: to walk their dogs, to play football and to simply sit and breathe.

I still remember the summer my grandad taught me to ride a bike on that very grass, wobbling and laughing until the sun went down. Thousands of families have memories exactly like mine, and thousands more are still waiting to make them.

Do not let this park disappear without a fight. Sign the petition today, come to Tuesday's meeting and tell the council: Meadow Park is not for sale.

Look at the leaflet 'Save Our Meadow Park'. Identify the persuasive language technique used in each quotation below.

(a)'Can you imagine your children growing up without a single blade of grass to run across?'(1)

(b)'to walk their dogs, to play football and to simply sit and breathe'(1)

(c)'the beating heart of our community'(1)

(d)'Sign the petition today, come to Tuesday's meeting and tell the council'(1)

(Total for Question 1 is 4 marks)

Look again at the whole of the leaflet. Here are eight statements. Choose the four statements that are TRUE.
A. The park has existed for over sixty years.
B. The writer wants to build a car park in Meadow Park.
C. The writer acknowledges the council's argument about congestion before disagreeing with it.
D. The writer's grandad has never visited the park.
E. The writer uses a personal anecdote about learning to ride a bike.
F. The leaflet ends with a call to action, telling readers what to do next.
G. The leaflet argues that the car park is a good idea for local traffic.
H. The writer says local families rarely use the park.

(Total for Question 2 is 4 marks)

The leaflet acknowledges an opposing view before arguing against it.

(a)Write out the sentence that acknowledges the opposing (counter) argument.(1)

(b)Write out the sentence that rebuts (argues against) that view.(1)

(Total for Question 3 is 2 marks)

Match each persuasive technique to its correct definition, using the table below.

Letter	Definition
A	Addressing the reader directly, often using 'you' or 'we', to build a personal connection
B	Asking a question that expects no direct answer, designed to make the reader think or agree
C	A short, personal story used to create an emotional connection with the reader
D	Listing three parallel words or phrases together for rhythm and emphasis
E	Repeating a word or phrase for emphasis, to make an idea more memorable
F	Choosing vocabulary deliberately to appeal to the reader's feelings

(a)rule of three(1)

(b)rhetorical question(1)

(c)emotive language(1)

(d)direct address(1)

(e)anecdote(1)

(f)repetition(1)

(Total for Question 4 is 6 marks)

Which sentence works as the leaflet's call to action at the end?

A) 'Close your eyes and picture Meadow Park without its oak trees, its duck pond or its rusty old swings.'
B) 'We understand the concern.'
C) 'Sign the petition today, come to Tuesday's meeting and tell the council: Meadow Park is not for sale.'
D) 'I still remember the summer my grandad taught me to ride a bike on that very grass.'

(Total for Question 5 is 1 mark)

Which pattern best describes the overall structure of the whole leaflet?

A) Chronological order, moving from the distant past to the present day
B) An opening hook, then a counter-argument and rebuttal, then an anecdote, then a call to action
C) A single continuous argument that never acknowledges any opposing view
D) A list of statistics followed by a short conclusion

(Total for Question 6 is 1 mark)

Complete this persuasive sentence with your own rule of three, using three parallel words or phrases: 'A new skate park would give young people somewhere to ___, ___ and ___.'

(Total for Question 7 is 3 marks)

Rewrite this statement as a rhetorical question that would persuade a reader to agree with it: 'Everyone should recycle more.'

(Total for Question 8 is 2 marks)

Rewrite this sentence, replacing the plain word 'knocked down' with more vivid, emotive vocabulary to persuade readers to oppose the plan: 'The old library building will be knocked down and replaced with flats.'

(Total for Question 9 is 2 marks)

Write a short anecdote (2 to 3 sentences), told in the first person, that a student could use to open a persuasive speech about the importance of school libraries.

(Total for Question 10 is 3 marks)

Some people argue that homework should be banned for Year 10 students.

(a)Write one sentence that fairly acknowledges this opposing view.(2)

(b)Write one sentence that firmly rebuts (argues against) that view.(2)

(Total for Question 11 is 4 marks)

Which connective would work best to introduce a rebuttal, straight after a counter-argument has just been acknowledged?

A) Furthermore
B) For example
C) However
D) Firstly

(Total for Question 12 is 1 mark)

Below are four sentences describing what happens in each paragraph of the 'Save Our Meadow Park' leaflet, in the WRONG order. Write the letters in the correct order, matching the leaflet's actual four paragraphs.

A. The writer shares a personal anecdote about learning to ride a bike in the park, before repeating 'thousands of families' to widen the emotional appeal.
B. The writer opens with rhetorical questions asking the reader to imagine the park gone, before revealing the council's plan to build a car park.
C. The writer ends with a set of direct commands, telling the reader exactly what to do to help save the park.
D. The writer acknowledges the council's argument about congestion, then rebuts it by asking whether a car park is really worth losing the community's only green space.

(1st paragraph)Which letter is described first in the leaflet?(1)

(2nd paragraph)Which letter is described second in the leaflet?(1)

(3rd paragraph)Which letter is described third in the leaflet?(1)

(4th paragraph)Which letter is described fourth in the leaflet?(1)

(Total for Question 13 is 4 marks)

Read this student's attempt at a persuasive paragraph about banning phones in school.

'Phones are very bad for school. Phones are very distracting. Phones are very annoying for teachers. I think phones should be banned. Thank you.'

Identify TWO structural or language weaknesses in the writing, explaining the effect of each.

(Total for Question 14 is 4 marks)

Rewrite this sentence correctly, fixing the punctuation error while keeping its persuasive impact: 'Schools should ban junk food in vending machines, it is bad for our health and our future.'

(Total for Question 15 is 3 marks)

This attempt at a rule of three is repetitive and lacks impact because all three items repeat the same word. Rewrite it using three distinct, well-chosen words or phrases: 'The new skate park would be good, good and good for young people in the town.'

(Total for Question 16 is 3 marks)

Below is a paragraph from a student's persuasive letter about opening a new cinema in the town. It contains several punctuation, spelling and structural weaknesses. Rewrite it correctly, fixing every error you can find, and add ONE persuasive opening sentence and ONE persuasive closing sentence to strengthen its structure.

'our town needs a new cinema, some people say we already have enough entertainment options however I disagree the nearest cinema is 20 miles away, which means famlies have to travel for hours just too watch a film.'

(Total for Question 17 is 6 marks)

Write a short persuasive paragraph (approximately 80 to 100 words) arguing that all students should have access to free school meals. Your paragraph must include: one rhetorical question, one example of a rule of three, and one example of direct address to the reader.

(Total for Question 18 is 10 marks)

Before you write your answer to Question 20, complete a short plan for your letter.

(a)Identify the form of the writing.(1)

(b)Identify the audience for the writing.(1)

(c)Identify the purpose of the writing.(1)

(Total for Question 19 is 3 marks)

Write a letter to your headteacher arguing for or against the following statement: 'All students should be given more independence and less strict rules as they progress through secondary school.'
Use a range of persuasive language and structural techniques, including at least one rhetorical question, one rule of three, a counter-argument with a rebuttal, and a clear call to action.
Aim for approximately 250 to 350 words.

(Total for Question 20 is 20 marks)

Mark scheme · Y10.4 Persuasive Language Structures

Question 1

(a) B1 rhetorical question
(a) Answer: Rhetorical question
(b) B1 rule of three / tripling
(b) Answer: Rule of three (tripling)
(c) B1 emotive language / metaphor
(c) Answer: Emotive language (metaphor)
(d) B1 imperative verbs (a rule of three of commands)
(d) Answer: Imperative verbs (a rule of three of commands)

Question 2

B1 A selected (true)
B1 C selected (true)
B1 E selected (true)
B1 F selected (true)
Answer: A, C, E and F are true. B is false (the council, not the writer, wants the car park); D is false (the grandad taught the writer to ride a bike there); G is false (the writer questions, rather than supports, the car park); H is false (families use the park every single day).

Question 3

(a) B1 'Yes, the council says a car park would ease congestion on the high street.' (or 'We understand the concern.')
(a) Answer: 'Yes, the council says a car park would ease congestion on the high street.'
(b) B1 'But is a few extra parking spaces really worth losing the only green space for streets around?'
(b) Answer: 'But is a few extra parking spaces really worth losing the only green space for streets around?'

Question 4

(a) B1 D
(a) Answer: D
(b) B1 B
(b) Answer: B
(c) B1 F
(c) Answer: F
(d) B1 A
(d) Answer: A
(e) B1 C
(e) Answer: C
(f) B1 E
(f) Answer: E

Question 5

B1 C
Answer: C

Question 6

B1 B
Answer: B

Question 7

B1 first item is a plausible, grammatically parallel phrase supporting a positive point about a skate park (oe)
B1 second item is a plausible, grammatically parallel phrase supporting a positive point about a skate park (oe)
B1 third item is a plausible, grammatically parallel phrase supporting a positive point about a skate park (oe)
Answer: Sample answer: 'somewhere to meet their friends, stay active and feel part of a community.' (accept any three grammatically parallel, plausible items)

Question 8

B1 produces a genuine question, ending in a question mark, that reframes the original statement (oe)
B1 the question is clearly designed to lead the reader towards agreement rather than simply to request information (oe)
Answer: Sample answer: 'How can any of us justify throwing away paper, glass and plastic that could so easily be recycled?' (accept any rhetorical question that reframes the statement to prompt agreement)

Question 9

B1 replaces 'knocked down' with a more vivid, emotive verb phrase, e.g. 'torn down', 'destroyed', 'bulldozed' (oe)
B1 the resulting sentence is grammatically correct and clearly more emotive/persuasive in tone than the original (oe)
Answer: Sample answer: 'The much-loved old library building will be torn down and replaced with soulless flats.' (accept any answer that replaces 'knocked down' with vivid, emotive vocabulary while remaining grammatically correct)

Question 10

B1 written consistently in the first person ('I')
B1 describes a specific, believable personal memory rather than a general statement (oe)
B1 the anecdote clearly links to the topic of school libraries and is likely to engage the audience emotionally (oe)
Answer: Sample answer: 'I still remember the first time a librarian handed me a book about explorers and told me I would love it. I read it in a single weekend, and it was the moment I discovered that reading could feel like an adventure.' (accept any first-person, specific, relevant anecdote)

Question 11

(a) B1 uses an appropriate concessive opener, e.g. 'It is true that', 'Some people believe', 'Admittedly' (oe)
(a) B1 clearly and fairly states the opposing view without immediately arguing against it (oe)
(a) Answer: Sample answer: 'It is true that some students feel overwhelmed by homework on top of a long school day.'
(b) B1 uses an appropriate contrasting connective, e.g. 'However', 'Nevertheless', 'Yet' (oe)
(b) B1 gives a convincing, specific reason why the opposing view is mistaken (oe)
(b) Answer: Sample answer: 'However, regular homework builds the independent study habits that Year 10 students will need for their GCSE exams.'

Question 12

B1 C) However
Answer: C

Question 13

(1st paragraph) B1 B
(1st paragraph) Answer: B
(2nd paragraph) B1 D
(2nd paragraph) Answer: D
(3rd paragraph) B1 A
(3rd paragraph) Answer: A
(4th paragraph) B1 C
(4th paragraph) Answer: C

Question 14

B1 identifies the repetitive overuse of 'very' with no variety of emotive vocabulary (oe)
B1 explains the effect, e.g. the repetition makes the writing feel monotonous and lazy rather than persuasive (oe)
B1 identifies a structural weakness, e.g. no counter-argument, evidence or anecdote is used to support the claim, and the ending gives no real call to action (oe)
B1 explains the effect, e.g. the paragraph reads as a bare list of opinions rather than a developed argument, so it is unlikely to convince a sceptical reader (oe)
Answer: Any two of: the repeated word 'very' is used with no variety, making the writing feel monotonous; there is no counter-argument, evidence or anecdote to support the claim, making it feel like an unsupported list of opinions; the short, simple sentences show little sentence variety; the ending ('Thank you') is abrupt and gives no real call to action.

Question 15

B1 identifies that the comma incorrectly joins two independent clauses (a comma splice)
B1 corrects it appropriately, e.g. with a semicolon, full stop, or coordinating/subordinating conjunction, cao
B1 the corrected sentence keeps its persuasive, emotive tone rather than becoming flat or clumsy (oe)
Answer: 'Schools should ban junk food in vending machines; it is bad for our health and our future.' (or: 'Schools should ban junk food in vending machines because it is bad for our health and our future.')

Question 16

B1 first replacement is a distinct, vivid word or phrase (oe)
B1 second replacement is a distinct, vivid word or phrase (oe)
B1 third replacement is a distinct, vivid word or phrase (oe)
Answer: Sample answer: 'The new skate park would be exciting, safe and inclusive for young people in the town.' (accept any three distinct, well-chosen words or phrases)

Question 17

Level 0 (0): No accurate corrections made; errors remain uncorrected or new errors introduced, and no attempt made to add an opening or closing sentence.
Level 1 (1-2): One or two technical errors corrected (e.g. capitalisation or one spelling/homophone error), with little or no attempt to add an effective opening or closing sentence.
Level 2 (3-4): Most technical errors corrected, including the spelling and homophone errors and at least one sentence-boundary fix, with a reasonable attempt at an opening and/or closing persuasive sentence.
Level 3 (5-6): All technical errors corrected accurately, and an effective, clearly persuasive opening sentence and closing sentence are added that improve the paragraph's overall structure.
Indicative content:
- Capital letter added for 'Our' at the start of the sentence.
- Sentence boundary corrected between 'a new cinema' and 'some people say' (full stop and capital S, or semicolon).
- Sentence boundary corrected between 'entertainment options' and 'however I disagree' (full stop and capital H, or semicolon), avoiding a run-on sentence.
- 'famlies' corrected to 'families'.
- 'too' corrected to 'to' (homophone: the infinitive 'to watch', not 'also/excessively').
- An engaging opening sentence added (e.g. a rhetorical question or a vivid image) to hook the reader before the argument begins.
- A clear closing sentence added that issues a call to action or a memorable final statement.

Question 18

Content and organisation (AO5)
- Level 1 (1-2): Simple, undeveloped argument in favour of free school meals; little sense of a clear persuasive voice or paragraph organisation.
- Level 2 (3-4): Some relevant, engaged argument; an attempt at a consistent persuasive voice; ideas are mostly sequenced clearly.
- Level 3 (5-6): Clear, engaging and convincing argument in a consistent, well-judged persuasive voice; well organised with a genuine sense of purpose.
Use of the three specified techniques (AO6)
- Level 1 (1): At most one of the three required features (rhetorical question, rule of three, direct address) is present and accurate.
- Level 2 (2-3): Two of the three required features are present and used with reasonable accuracy and effect.
- Level 3 (4): All three required features are present, used accurately, and each contributes clearly to the persuasive effect of the paragraph.

Question 19

(a) B1 identifies the form as a letter (to a headteacher) (oe)
(a) Answer: A letter to a headteacher.
(b) B1 identifies the audience as the headteacher (an adult in a position of authority) (oe)
(b) Answer: The headteacher.
(c) B1 identifies the purpose as to argue or persuade the reader of a point of view on the given statement (oe)
(c) Answer: To argue/persuade the headteacher of a personal point of view on the statement about independence and school rules.

Question 20

Content and organisation (AO5)
- Level 1 (1-3): Simple, limited vocabulary. Simple structure, sometimes unclear. Little or no evidence of paragraphing or organisation. Limited or no awareness of register, form or purpose.
- Level 2 (4-6): Some attempt to match register, form and purpose. Some use of structural and persuasive features, with limited success. Some evidence of organisation, which may lack a fully developed argument.
- Level 3 (7-9): Consistent persuasive tone with increasingly sophisticated vocabulary. A range of structural features used with some success, including a counter-argument and rebuttal. Generally clear organisation, matched to register, form and purpose.
- Level 4 (10-12): Clear, controlled and convincing communication of a sustained argument. Sophisticated vocabulary and a range of well-judged structural features (hook, counter-argument and rebuttal, call to action) used to shape the whole letter. Consistently matched to register, form and purpose, with clear awareness of the reader.
Technical accuracy (AO6)
- Level 1 (1-2): Occasional accurate spelling and punctuation. Simple sentence structures attempted, with limited variety. Limited or inconsistent use of Standard English forms.
- Level 2 (3-4): Some accurate spelling and punctuation. Some control of a range of sentence structures. Some use of Standard English with some appropriate vocabulary choices.
- Level 3 (5-6): Mostly accurate spelling and punctuation, including a range of vocabulary. Uses a good range of sentence structures accurately for effect. Uses Standard English consistently, with only occasional errors.
- Level 4 (7-8): Consistently high level of accuracy in spelling and punctuation. Wide range of grammatical structures used accurately and precisely for deliberate rhetorical effect. Uses a full range of vocabulary fluently and accurately.

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