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Sutton SET English Mock Paper 5
Preparation for the Sutton Selective Eligibility Test, sat for admission to Wilson's School, Sutton Grammar School, Wallington County Grammar School, Nonsuch High School for Girls and Wallington High School for Girls. This is an original mock paper written by Revision Library. It is not a past paper and it is not an official specimen.
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- Time allowed
- 50 minutes
- Total marks
- 62
- Questions
- 62
- Level
- Strong candidate
- You have 50 minutes for this paper. There are 62 questions and every question is worth 1 mark.
- The paper has four sections. The recommended times are 5 minutes for Section A, 25 minutes for Section B, 10 minutes for Section C and 10 minutes for Section D. These times are advice, not rules. You may spend longer on a section if you need to, and you may go back to earlier questions at any point.
- Every question gives you five options, A to E. Mark your answers on the separate answer sheet in pencil. If you change your mind, rub the old mark out completely so that only one mark is left.
- Most questions have one answer. Some ask you to choose exactly two options, and some ask you to choose all the options that apply. Those questions say so, so read each one carefully.
- There is no negative marking, so a wrong answer costs you nothing. It is worth answering every question.
Section A: Spelling (about 5 minutes)
In each question, one of the five spellings is correct and the other four are not.
Choose the correct spelling and mark one answer for each question.
- 11 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
The hotel can ____ two hundred guests.
- 21 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
Her ____ note-taking meant she had missed nothing at all.
- 31 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
The two paths run ____ to each other all the way to the old bridge.
- 41 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
Check the ____ of each unfamiliar name before reading aloud.
- 51 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
The ____ meets on the first Monday of every month.
- 61 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
Cloudy water may be a sign of a problem in the pond's ____.
- 71 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
A flash of ____ lit the whole valley.
- 81 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
The guide gave us a ____ description of every carving.
- 91 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
Mina tried to ____ her brother to take the quieter route.
- 101 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
The climbers had ____ food to wait safely for daylight.
Section B: Text 1 (about 25 minutes)
Read Text 1 carefully, then answer questions 11 to 38.
Most questions have one answer. Where a question asks for exactly two answers, or for all the answers that apply, it says so.
Kennel Twenty-Seven
When I was eleven, I believed wanting something fiercely was the same as understanding it. Because I decided everyone else had given up on Fable, I made him my private campaign during the summer I helped at Greycroft Greyhound Rescue. I was the youngest volunteer and the only boy on Tuesday's rota, but considered both facts qualifications. Years later, a newspaper cutting showed me how confidently I had mistaken myself for the hero.
Greycroft occupied a former builder's yard behind the ring road. By nine, the corrugated roofs ticked with heat, and the kennel passage smelt of warm straw, disinfectant and the liver treats in Val's apron. I rinsed bowls, pegged blankets on the wire fence and walked quieter dogs round the nettle field. Fable lived in kennel twenty-seven. He was a fawn greyhound with a white comma on his chest and a blue card stamped RETURNED TWICE.
He had not bitten anyone or ruined a carpet. He froze in doorways and, when visitors arrived, became as uninteresting as a rolled umbrella. Val said people wanted a dog to 'show them something'. I heard a problem in advertising. I rewrote his card in green felt-tip, brushed him and practised a brisk entrance from the yard. 'Stop auditioning him, Jonah,' Val said. I thought she meant my timing needed work.
In June, a family in matching cycling tops came. I gave my speech about greyhounds being surprisingly lazy, then trotted Fable past twice with a liver treat. When their little boy clapped, Fable folded himself beneath the blanket shelf, nose to the wall. I blamed the metal roof for making the clap echo. Val crouched but did not reach under. 'He has already performed,' she said. 'You just disliked the answer.'
I refused to be discouraged. One week I tied a red spotted scarf round his neck for photographs. Next I taught him to touch my palm with his nose, although he did it only in an empty yard. On a clipboard I circled people's reasons for choosing another dog: too timid, no sparkle, already returned. By July I spoke of Fable's progress as though I had manufactured it.
Mrs Iqbal arrived on the hottest Thursday. She worked nights in a hospital laboratory and lived in a first-floor flat with a shared courtyard, details I placed in my hopeless column. While Val fetched the adoption form, Mrs Iqbal sat sideways on an upturned feed tub, reading a sack of biscuits. She did not call Fable. He came out, sniffed her canvas shoe and lowered his chin on it. I called this coincidence and squeaked a rubber ball. He vanished. 'Why did you do that?' Val asked. 'So she'd see what he can do.' Mrs Iqbal looked at the doorway. 'I had,' she said.
She returned four times, bringing no treats. On the third visit, he stood close enough for her sleeve to rest against his shoulder. On the fourth, he slept with one paw across her shoe. I kept mentioning the stairs and missing private garden. Val took my clipboard away. 'A garden is not a character reference,' she said.
On adoption day I led Fable towards Mrs Iqbal's car, talking too brightly. At the open door I tightened the lead; he leaned backwards until his collar made two ridges in his neck. Mrs Iqbal put his blanket on the back seat and sat in front without turning. For once, I obeyed Val and did nothing. After a minute Fable stepped into the car. 'He knows where I am,' Mrs Iqbal said, as if this, rather than the route home, were the necessary direction.
The local paper printed a photograph of me holding the green card. Beneath it, I had said, 'I never gave up on him.' I was proud of that sentence for years. As an adult, I heard its boast. Fable had not needed confidence, sparkle or my heroic story. He needed choices, and Mrs Iqbal offered them by leaving room. The most useful thing I did all summer was the last: I stopped pulling, stopped presenting, and let the dog I claimed to know walk past me.
This passage was written for Revision Library.
- 111 mark
What three jobs does Jonah say were his at Greycroft?
- 121 mark
Which marking appears on Fable's chest?
- 131 mark
How many times does Mrs Iqbal visit after her first meeting with Fable?
- 141 mark
Where does Mrs Iqbal work?
- 151 mark
What does Mrs Iqbal put on the back seat of her car?
- 161 mark
In the opening paragraph, the adult narrator says he had mistaken himself for 'the hero'.
Which option best explains what he now understands?
- 171 mark
Where Jonah rewrites Fable's card and practises an entrance, Val says, 'Stop auditioning him.'
Why is auditioning the most precise word?
- 181 mark
After Fable hides from the clapping child, Val says, 'He has already performed. You just disliked the answer.'
Which option best explains her point?
- 191 mark
Jonah circles people's reasons for choosing another dog and says he had begun speaking as though he had 'manufactured' Fable's progress.
What does manufactured suggest here?
- 201 mark
At her first visit, Mrs Iqbal sits sideways and does not call Fable.
Which option best explains why this helps?
- 211 mark
After Jonah squeaks the ball, Mrs Iqbal looks at the empty doorway and says, 'I had.'
What does her brief reply most precisely mean?
- 221 mark
Val tells Jonah, 'A garden is not a character reference.'
Which option best explains her criticism?
- 231 mark
On adoption day Mrs Iqbal says, 'He knows where I am.'
Why does the narrator call this 'the necessary direction'?
- 241 mark
In the final paragraph, the adult narrator calls doing nothing 'the most useful thing' he did.
Which option best explains this apparent contradiction?
- 251 mark
Fable becomes 'as uninteresting as a rolled umbrella' when visitors arrive.
Select the TWO words that best match uninteresting in this comparison.
Select TWO answers.
- 261 mark
Select the TWO words that most accurately describe the eleven-year-old Jonah's campaign.
Select TWO answers.
- 271 mark
Select the TWO words that best describe Mrs Iqbal's manner with Fable.
Select TWO answers.
- 281 mark
The narrator says the newspaper sentence sounded 'less generous' when he read it as an adult.
Select the TWO words that best describe how it sounded to him then.
Select TWO answers.
- 291 mark
Four details below accurately describe Greycroft. Which one is NOT correct?
- 301 mark
Which claim about Fable is NOT supported by Text 1?
- 311 mark
Jonah makes several assumptions about Mrs Iqbal. Which one does he NOT make?
- 321 mark
Which statement about Val's actions is NOT correct?
- 331 mark
Which details show Jonah trying to make Fable more impressive to potential adopters?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 341 mark
During Mrs Iqbal's visits, which signs indicate that Fable is choosing greater closeness?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 351 mark
The adult narrator openly corrects his younger self. Which statements express those later corrections?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 361 mark
Which moments show Fable responding badly to pressure or sudden stimulation?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 371 mark
Which sensory details make the kennels feel hot and strongly scented?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 381 mark
By the end, which of Jonah's usual actions has he deliberately stopped?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
Section C: Text 2 (about 10 minutes)
Read Text 2 carefully, then answer questions 39 to 50.
Most questions have one answer. Where a question asks for exactly two answers, or for all the answers that apply, it says so.
Field Notes from Bramble Mead, 18 June 1874
At 8.17 in the evening I stationed myself beside the eastern hedge of Bramble Mead. The meadow measured approximately 310 yards from gate to brook. I had advanced 46 yards when an adult brown hare emerged from the grass, 39 yards from my position.
The specimen stood, by comparison with a tussock afterwards measured, some 25 inches at the crown. Its ears inclined separately, the left towards the village road and the right towards myself, an arrangement of unusual exactitude. At 8.23 it took seven bites of clover. I mention the number because careless observers substitute impression for evidence.
A smaller hare appeared at 8.31. The two approached within six feet, whereupon the first sprang vertically and the second passed beneath it. This manoeuvre was repeated three times. It would be injudicious to call the exercise play, that term belonging to the nursery rather than natural philosophy; nevertheless, no contest for food or ground was apparent.
At 8.36 the breeze altered and carried my scent across the meadow. Neither animal fled. The smaller washed its forepaws, while the larger sat with black-tipped ears above the grass and regarded the hedge. I was obliged to consider that my concealment, upon which I had privately congratulated myself, had not deceived them.
Both hares departed at 8.42, not in alarm but at an easy bound towards the brook, appearing and vanishing in the seed-heads. The observation occupied twenty-five minutes. I record, solely for completeness, that the empty meadow seemed a less exact place. This impression, having no measurable zoological value, need not detain us.
This passage was written for Revision Library.
- 391 mark
In the paragraph describing seven bites of clover, the writer criticises observers who 'substitute impression for evidence'.
Which option best explains why he includes this remark?
- 401 mark
The hare's ears point in different directions, which the writer calls 'an arrangement of unusual exactitude'.
What is the most precise effect of that phrase?
- 411 mark
The writer says it would be 'injudicious' to call the repeated leaps play.
Why is he so cautious?
- 421 mark
When the breeze changes, the writer is 'obliged to consider' that his concealment had failed.
Which option best explains the wording?
- 431 mark
In the final paragraph, the empty meadow seems 'a less exact place'.
What does this best reveal?
- 441 mark
Four measurements are recorded in the journal. Which one is NOT correct?
- 451 mark
Which event does NOT occur between 8.31 and 8.42?
- 461 mark
Which description of the naturalist's conduct is NOT supported by his entry?
- 471 mark
Which recorded actions belong to the smaller hare?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 481 mark
Which features contribute to the field entry's formal, scientific manner?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 491 mark
The writer tries to keep feeling out of his record. Which phrases reveal that effort?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 501 mark
The naturalist says it would be 'injudicious' to call the hares' exercise play.
Select the TWO words closest to injudicious in this context.
Select TWO answers.
Section D: Comparing Text 1 and Text 2 (about 10 minutes)
Use both Text 1 and Text 2 to answer questions 51 to 62.
Some questions ask for all the answers that apply. Read the wording carefully.
- 511 mark
Both narrators watch an animal respond to a human presence. Which statements are supported by BOTH texts?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 521 mark
Which features belong to the rescue narrative but not to the field journal?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 531 mark
Each narrator's pride is quietly exposed. Which details contribute to that effect?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 541 mark
The texts use numbers for different purposes. Which comparisons are accurate?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 551 mark
Which details in the two texts support the idea that waiting can reveal more than interference?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 561 mark
Which qualities distinguish the Victorian journal's voice from Jonah's narrative voice?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 571 mark
Movement helps each writer show an animal's freedom to decide. Which examples do that?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 581 mark
Both narrators soften an uncomfortable truth about themselves before finally admitting it. Which statements trace that pattern accurately?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 591 mark
Which option best describes the main contrast in how the narrators gain understanding?
- 601 mark
Which option most accurately contrasts the treatment of emotion in the two endings?
- 611 mark
Text 1 says Fable became 'as uninteresting as a rolled umbrella'; Text 2 describes the hare's ears with 'unusual exactitude'.
What is the most important difference between these descriptions?
- 621 mark
Why is the naturalist's field journal an effective companion to Jonah's account of finding Fable a home?
Answers, mark scheme and worked explanations
- 11 mark
B
Accommodate has two c letters and two m letters: ac-com-modate.
A loses one c, C loses a c and an m, D changes the second o to a, and E adds a final t.
- 21 mark
D
Start from conscience, keep conscien, then finish with tious: conscien-tious.
Consciencious keeps the c of conscience where the t belongs. Conscientous drops the i out of tious, conscentious drops the i after the sci, and concientious loses the s altogether.
- 31 mark
C
Parallel has one r and then a double l in the middle, with a single l on the end. The two l letters side by side are the parallel lines, which is the picture worth keeping.
Parrallel doubles the r instead. Paralell moves the double pair to the end, parallell doubles both, and paralel leaves only one l in the middle.
- 41 mark
A
Pronunciation comes from pronounce, but it does not keep the second o: pro-nun-ci-a-tion.
Pronounciation is the common trap; B and E lose a syllable, while D uses the wrong middle vowel.
- 51 mark
C
Committee doubles three times over: double m, double t, double e. Counting the pairs as you write it is the whole trick.
Comittee has a single m, commitee a single t and committe a single e. Comitee manages to lose two pairs at once.
- 61 mark
B
Environment keeps environ intact before -ment: en-viron-ment.
A drops the n, C adds an e, D reverses io, and E doubles the r.
- 71 mark
B
Lightning, the flash in a storm, has no e between light and ning.
Lightening means making something lighter. C drops letters, D doubles n, and E has the wrong final vowel.
- 81 mark
A
Thorough is spelled th-o-r-o-u-g-h.
B doubles r, C begins with the wrong vowel sound, D adds an extra u, and E drops the second o.
- 91 mark
C
Persuade has the pattern per-suade.
A uses w for the sound, B changes a to e, D begins pur-, and E adds a second s.
- 101 mark
D
Sufficient has two f letters and the ending -cient.
A drops an i, B drops an f, C changes e to a, and E adds a second c.
- 111 mark
A
The second paragraph lists rinsing bowls, pegging blankets on the fence and walking the quieter dogs.
The other options borrow real activities or places but replace at least one of Jonah's stated jobs.
- 121 mark
C
Fable is fawn with a white comma on his chest.
Blue belongs to his kennel card and red spots belong to the scarf, not to his coat.
- 131 mark
C
The passage states, 'She returned four times.' These are four visits after the first meeting.
The third and fourth visits are described individually, but that does not make them the total.
- 141 mark
B
Jonah records that she worked nights in a hospital laboratory.
The other workplaces appear plausible from the story's setting, but none is her job.
- 151 mark
A
On adoption day she places Fable's blanket on the back seat before sitting in front.
The biscuits, clipboard, ball and card occur earlier but are not put in the car.
- 161 mark
B
B holds both truths together: Jonah persisted and eventually stood back, but Fable and Mrs Iqbal made the decisive connection.
A, D and E contain real features of his story but do not explain 'hero'. C accepts Jonah's childish belief that everyone else had given up, which the passage never confirms.
- 171 mark
A
An audition is a prepared performance for approval. Jonah polishes the card, coat and entrance so visitors will choose Fable.
B, C and D describe parts of his activity, but miss his attempt to impress an audience. E reverses who is being made to pass the test.
- 181 mark
B
Val treats hiding as an answer: Fable has plainly shown how he feels about noise and pressure. Jonah dislikes that honest display because it will not sell him.
A and C are true details but stop before Val's meaning. D is Jonah's excuse. E narrows the answer to training, which Val does not say Fable needs.
- 191 mark
B
Manufactured makes Jonah sound like a maker claiming ownership of the result. B adds the crucial contrast with Fable's own choices and sense of safety.
A, C, D and E are all parts of Jonah's campaign, but each is less precise about the pride exposed by the verb.
- 201 mark
C
Fable struggles when asked to perform. By turning aside and staying quiet, Mrs Iqbal leaves approaching as his choice, and he comes out.
A, B and E match what is happening around her but not why it helps Fable. D may sound plausible, yet nothing shows she is uncertain.
- 211 mark
A
Jonah says he wanted her to see what Fable could do. She replies that his unprompted approach was already the meaningful thing she had seen.
B and C become visible too, while D may be developing and E uses Jonah's idea of a demonstration. Only A identifies the achievement her reply protects.
- 221 mark
A
A character reference proves personal qualities. Val's comparison says property cannot prove patience or kindness, both of which Mrs Iqbal has demonstrated.
E is broadly true but less exact because Val is correcting Jonah's repeated preference for a garden. B, C and D contain relevant practical ideas without explaining the comparison.
- 231 mark
B
The sentence contrasts two kinds of direction. Jonah thinks of a route, but Fable needs the reliable location of someone who will wait for him.
A, D and E are partly involved in the scene, but B includes both presence and freedom from force. C explains only the literal route that the narrator dismisses.
- 241 mark
B
The contradiction disappears once help is judged by what Fable needs. Not pulling gives the dog the choice that Jonah's campaigns kept taking away.
A, C, D and E are true around the event, but none explains why inaction itself was more useful than his previous activity.
- 251 mark
A and C
A rolled umbrella sits quietly without attracting attention, so unobtrusive and ordinary fit the comparison.
It may be closed, but that describes its shape rather than the meaning of uninteresting. Useless and unfriendly add judgements the sentence does not make.
- 261 mark
A and C
He is persistent because he works for months. He is presumptuous because he assumes he understands Fable and prospective adopters better than Val or the dog.
He sometimes notices details, but repeatedly misreads them, so perceptive is too generous. He is neither neglectful nor secretive.
- 271 mark
A and C
She returns repeatedly, waits and limits her own movements, so patient and restrained are most exact.
She is not detached: her attention is careful. Hesitant suggests uncertainty, and playful better describes Jonah's toys and scarf.
- 281 mark
A and E
'I never gave up on him' centres Jonah and treats Fable as his achievement, making it self-important and possessive.
It once sounded triumphant, but the adult's criticism goes further. Patient is only partly flattering, while selfless is the opposite of his new judgement.
- 291 mark
E
The blankets are pegged on a wire fence, not dried on a brick wall.
The location, former use, roofs and nettle field are all stated in the second paragraph.
- 301 mark
C
The passage explicitly says Fable had not ruined a carpet.
A, B, D and E are all directly supported, though they come from different stages of the summer.
- 311 mark
E
Her night work is noted, but Jonah never says it would leave Fable alone too often.
A and B make up his 'hopeless column', C is stated, and D motivates the squeaked ball.
- 321 mark
B
Val crouches beside Jonah after Fable hides, but she deliberately does not reach beneath the shelf.
Her warning, question, removal of the clipboard and final instruction are all in the passage.
- 331 mark
A and B and D
The new card, rehearsed entrance and scarf are all parts of presenting Fable attractively.
C records rejection rather than impressing a visitor. E is the moment Jonah stops presenting him.
- 341 mark
A and B and C and E
A, B, C and E form a sequence from investigation to contact and sleep.
D never occurs. Mrs Iqbal brings no treats, which helps distinguish her method from Jonah's.
- 351 mark
A and C and D
A, C and D state the adult insight: desire did not ensure understanding, his quotation centred him, and choice was what Fable needed.
B is the boy's comic belief, while E repeats the mistaken housing judgement.
- 361 mark
B and C and D
The clap, squeak and tightened lead each produce retreat or resistance.
A is compliance for food rather than an obviously bad response, and E shows complete relaxation.
- 371 mark
A and B and C and E
A supplies heat; B, C and E build the layered smell of the passage between the kennels.
D is a sound detail from a later meeting. It makes the space vivid, but not hot or scented.
- 381 mark
A and B and C
The final sentence names pulling and presenting, and 'claimed to know' shows he has stopped assuming the right to speak for Fable.
Nothing says he stopped his kennel duties, and remembering is what allows the adult narration.
- 391 mark
A
A covers both purposes: seven bites are evidence, and 'careless observers' lets the writer congratulate himself by contrast.
B, D and E reflect his method, but miss the faint boast. C is possible in the subject area, yet appetite is not his stated complaint.
- 401 mark
B
Each ear monitors a different direction. 'Exactitude' sounds technical, but it also carries restrained admiration for such efficient alertness.
A makes the hare pose, C claims sounds the writer cannot know, and D ranks two equal directions. E is a plausible use of detail but not the phrase's effect.
- 411 mark
D
He can observe three leaps, but 'play' interprets their purpose. His caution is scientifically sound even though his nursery remark is pompous.
B and E capture his tone, while A and C capture uncertainty, but D most exactly distinguishes evidence from interpretation.
- 421 mark
A
A includes evidence, revision and wounded pride: he had privately praised his concealment, but the hares probably knew he was there and stayed calm.
B, C, D and E each contain part of that reasoning. None includes as precisely why 'obliged' is comic and reluctant.
- 431 mark
C
A place cannot literally become less exact. The awkward scientific phrase converts an emotional absence into something that sounds measurable.
A and D help create the wordplay, B uses the dusk, and E fits his caution, but only C explains both feeling and disguise.
- 441 mark
D
The hares came within six feet, not six yards.
All four other measurements are stated. The changed unit is the trap.
- 451 mark
D
The seven bites occur at 8.23, eight minutes before the interval begins.
The second arrival, leaps, changed breeze and departure all occur from 8.31 to 8.42.
- 461 mark
C
There is no movement closer after the second hare appears.
A, B, D and E all show his combination of precise observation and correction.
- 471 mark
A and B and C
The smaller hare arrives at 8.31, passes under the other during the manoeuvre and later washes its forepaws.
Seven bites belong to the first hare, and both depart easily rather than in alarm.
- 481 mark
A and B and C and E
Times, measurements, qualified estimates and caution about calling the action play all create a scientific register.
No conversation occurs. The writer is alone and addresses no companion.
- 491 mark
A and C and D
A rejects the feeling-laden word play, while C and D frame his emotional final impression as unwanted scientific material.
B admits pride rather than suppressing feeling. E is a calm observation of movement.
- 501 mark
A and B
Injudicious means showing poor judgement. Here unwise and premature fit because the evidence does not yet justify the label.
Unscientific is the likely result, not the closest meaning. Untruthful and unkind suggest moral faults absent from the sentence.
- 511 mark
A and B and D
Fable notices and chooses Mrs Iqbal; the hares probably know the naturalist is present. Both texts track approach or distance and make an observer revise a belief.
Food draws Fable during one display but not the hares, and neither text ends with a frightened run.
- 521 mark
A and B and D
Text 1 contains spoken exchanges, adult hindsight and Fable's car journey.
Exact clock times and measurements belong to Text 2, not the rescue narrative.
- 531 mark
A and C and D
Jonah's claimed qualifications are comic self-importance. The naturalist elevates his method and admits private self-congratulation.
Keeping a cutting does not by itself prove pride for all those years, and neither narrator directly calls himself foolish.
- 541 mark
A and B and D
Four return visits build Mrs Iqbal's patient relationship. Text 2's clock times order the entry, and seven bites support its claim to evidence.
Text 1 gives no height or travel distance, and Text 2 gives positions rather than a total distance travelled.
- 551 mark
A and C and D
Mrs Iqbal's stillness, Jonah's final pause and the naturalist's stationary observation all allow animal behaviour to unfold.
The forced trot is interference, while the criticism of other observers concerns precision rather than waiting.
- 561 mark
A and B and D
Minute-by-minute dating, qualified claims and dismissal of feeling give Text 2 its formal journal voice.
Direct speech and long retrospective hindsight are features of Text 1.
- 571 mark
A and B and C and E
A and B show Fable choosing approach or refusal. C and E show the hares acting and leaving without the observer directing them.
D is a position of attention, not an example of movement used to show freedom of decision.
- 581 mark
A and B and D
Jonah first supplies excuses for behaviour he dislikes, and the naturalist wraps his correction in reluctant wording.
Text 2 never says the hares saw a notebook, and neither ending proves that the narrators abandon every method they used.
- 591 mark
A
Val and Mrs Iqbal challenge Jonah, and adulthood changes his interpretation. The naturalist uses times, wind and behaviour within twenty-five minutes to revise one judgement.
The other options exchange the texts' methods or overstate one narrator's success or failure.
- 601 mark
D
Jonah judges his boast and states what Fable needed. The naturalist's 'less exact place' admits loss, then 'no measurable zoological value' attempts to exclude it.
B misses both reservations. C reverses the styles, and A and E invent certainty or blame absent from the endings.
- 611 mark
A
Jonah's simile exposes his demand for sparkle. The journal's grand word keeps its admiration within a supposedly scientific register.
B gives the animals intentions not proved, C confuses a tone word with a number, and D and E misidentify what the phrases describe.
- 621 mark
B
Jonah's final stillness finally lets Fable choose, undoing what his whole campaign had denied him. The naturalist keeps his distance and his measurements throughout, yet 'a less exact place' shows that watching from afar did not spare him from noticing what the hares' leaving had cost him.
A makes the naturalist sound more certain than 'obliged to consider' allows. C is true of Val's role but ignores what the journal teaches its own writer. D and E turn one detail from each text into a rule or a comparison that neither text supports.
Sutton Selective Eligibility Test, Stage 1, English (multiple choice). Written by Revision Library on 2026-08-29, independent check pending.
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