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Sutton Selective Eligibility Test · Stage 1
Sutton SET English Mock Paper 7
Preparation for the Sutton Selective Eligibility Test, sat for admission to Wilson's School, Sutton Grammar School, Wallington County Grammar School, Nonsuch High School for Girls and Wallington High School for Girls. This is an original mock paper written by Revision Library. It is not a past paper and it is not an official specimen.
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- Time allowed
- 50 minutes
- Total marks
- 62
- Questions
- 62
- Level
- Strong candidate
- You have 50 minutes for this paper. There are 62 questions and every question is worth 1 mark.
- The paper has four sections. The recommended times are 5 minutes for Section A, 25 minutes for Section B, 10 minutes for Section C and 10 minutes for Section D. These times are advice, not rules. You may spend longer on a section if you need to, and you may go back to earlier questions at any point.
- Every question gives you five options, A to E. Mark your answers on the separate answer sheet in pencil. If you change your mind, rub the old mark out completely so that only one mark is left.
- Most questions have one answer. Some ask you to choose exactly two options, and some ask you to choose all the options that apply. Those questions say so, so read each one carefully.
- There is no negative marking, so a wrong answer costs you nothing. It is worth answering every question.
Section A: Spelling (about 5 minutes)
In each question, one of the five spellings is correct and the other four are not.
Choose the correct spelling and mark one answer for each question.
- 11 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
There was an ____ silence after both speakers began at once.
- 21 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
A purple ____ appeared on my knee after the fall.
- 31 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
Out of ____, I lifted the lid of the old tin.
- 41 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
The exhausted walkers were ____ for a drink.
- 51 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
The rescue boat was ____ with ropes and lifejackets.
- 61 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
Exactly ____ chairs were arranged in the hall.
- 71 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
Repeated messages were sent to ____ the witness.
- 81 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
The masked singer kept her ____ secret.
- 91 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
Painting is one of her favourite ____ activities.
- 101 mark
Choose the correct spelling.
From the hilltop, we had a ____ view of the coast.
Section B: Text 1 (about 25 minutes)
Read Text 1 carefully, then answer questions 11 to 38.
Most questions have one answer. Where a question asks for exactly two answers, or for all the answers that apply, it says so.
Nine Locks to Alder Bend
At six, the canal held the sky so neatly that the Wren seemed to cut through two dawns. Grandad stood at the tiller, wearing the blue cap he claimed made rain avoid him. I perched on the roof with a windlass. Nine locks lay between Willow Wharf and Alder Bend, and I had drawn nine squares on my wrist to tick off. Grandad said, 'A lock crossed in a hurry still takes exactly as long.' I thought it sounded wise because nobody understood it.
At Mallow Lock he showed me the chamber. Upstream gates held back a high step of water; below us the canal lay nearly two metres lower. 'Think of a biscuit tin filling from the bottom,' he said, then frowned because biscuit tins did not usually have gates. He looped the centre rope round a bollard while I fitted the windlass to the paddle spindle. The iron handle was cold and heavier than it looked.
I attacked it. The paddle jumped up, water punched into the chamber and the Wren's rope snapped tight. Grandad caught my hand before the windlass could spin backwards. He lowered the paddle, one quiet turn at a time. 'The canal has been here two hundred years,' he said. 'It can spare you ten seconds.' My face burned. A cyclist waiting to cross stared at his watch, making ten seconds feel like a whole school assembly.
After that, Grandad let me make each move but asked for my reason first. Close the lower gates, or water escapes. Raise one ground paddle, because gentle flow steadies the boat. Watch the rope, because rising water can tighten it. He never said good or wrong. He said, 'What tells you that?' By the third lock, I had stopped looking at my wrist.
The canal threaded behind gardens and under a railway bridge. We passed tomato plants, a heron balanced like folded scissors, and Mr Devlin's boatyard, where Grandad lifted two fingers. Everybody seemed to know him. At Crow Mill, branches blocked the upper gate. Grandad climbed down the wet ladder with a boat hook. His boot slipped on the last rung and his knuckles struck the wall. A dark bruise spread across his hand. He hid his hand in his pocket before asking whether I had secured the rope.
Rain began beyond the mill, flattening the circles made by other drops. At Walnut Lock the upper pound was high, water licking over the gate in silver threads. Two walkers waited beneath one umbrella. Grandad nodded towards the paddles. 'Your lock.' I wanted him to take over when the left spindle refused to move, but his sore hand stayed pocketed. I checked the pawl, reset the windlass and leaned instead of jerking. The spindle turned.
The walkers asked whether we could open both paddles to hurry. Their impatience felt like the cyclist's watch. Then I saw the Wren tugging at her rope and opened only the far paddle another turn. The chamber filled evenly. When the water on both sides was level, I pushed. Nothing happened. I waited for the last bubbling to stop, pushed again, and the gate moved as softly as a cupboard door. Grandad did not praise me. He simply stepped aboard when I said it was safe.
We reached the ninth lock in late afternoon. Rain had polished every leaf, and steam rose from Grandad's coat when sun returned. He placed his brass windlass in my hand. Its handle was worn smooth by his palm and, before that, Grandma's. 'Keep it,' he said. I asked whether he would need it next week. He bent to untie the rope, taking longer than required. 'I have another.' We knew the rusty spare lived beneath the sink.
At Alder Bend we tied up under a chestnut tree. My nine ink squares had blurred into one blue cloud. While Grandad made tea, I rubbed the windlass and found a tiny W beside the socket. Grandma had scratched it to avoid muddling it with others. Across the water, nine white ducks nosed along the reeds. I counted aloud. Grandad joined in at seven, though neither of us risked losing our place.
This passage was written for Revision Library.
- 111 mark
In the opening paragraph, how does the narrator plan to record the locks they pass?
- 121 mark
At Mallow Lock, which job does Grandad do while the narrator fits the windlass?
- 131 mark
What causes Grandad's hand to be bruised at Crow Mill?
- 141 mark
At Walnut Lock, what does the narrator do before leaning on the stiff windlass?
- 151 mark
Where does the narrator find the scratched letter W?
- 161 mark
In the opening paragraph, Grandad says, 'A lock crossed in a hurry still takes exactly as long.'
What does he most precisely want the narrator to understand?
- 171 mark
At Mallow Lock, why does the cyclist's glance at his watch make ten seconds feel like 'a whole school assembly'?
- 181 mark
In the paragraph beginning 'After that', why does Grandad answer the narrator with 'What tells you that?' rather than saying good or wrong?
- 191 mark
By the third lock, the narrator has stopped looking at the squares on their wrist.
What best explains this change?
- 201 mark
Where Grandad hurts his hand, why does he tuck it into his pocket before asking about the rope?
- 211 mark
At Walnut Lock, Grandad says only, 'Your lock.'
Why is this brief instruction important?
- 221 mark
Why does the narrator refuse the walkers' suggestion to open both paddles fully?
- 231 mark
After the narrator opens Walnut Lock safely, Grandad does not offer praise and simply steps aboard.
What does this response most clearly communicate?
- 241 mark
Near the end, Grandad takes longer than necessary to untie a knot after giving away his windlass.
What is the best explanation for this detail?
- 251 mark
The narrator says, 'I attacked' the paddle spindle at Mallow Lock.
Select the TWO words that best describe how the narrator begins the task.
Select TWO answers.
- 261 mark
The heron is 'balanced like folded scissors'.
Select the TWO qualities this comparison most strongly suggests.
Select TWO answers.
- 271 mark
Select the TWO words that most accurately describe Grandad's way of teaching during the journey.
Select TWO answers.
- 281 mark
Select the TWO words that best describe the mood of the final paragraph.
Select TWO answers.
- 291 mark
Four details accurately describe the Wren's journey. Which one is NOT correct?
- 301 mark
Which statement about operating the locks is NOT supported by Text 1?
- 311 mark
The passage gives several details about Grandad. Which claim is NOT supported?
- 321 mark
Which description of the weather during the day is NOT correct?
- 331 mark
Which details show the narrator becoming a safer lock worker after the first mistake?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 341 mark
Which details suggest that Grandad is known and experienced on this canal?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 351 mark
The narrator feels pressure from people waiting at locks. Which parts of the text build that idea?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 361 mark
Which comparisons or personifications make water and canal objects seem active?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 371 mark
Which details connect the brass windlass with family history rather than only with today's work?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 381 mark
The ending returns to counting, but its meaning has changed. Which details help show that change?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
Section C: Text 2 (about 10 minutes)
Read Text 2 carefully, then answer questions 39 to 50.
Text 2 is shorter than Text 1, but its brief entries require close attention.
Walnut Lock: September Log
14 September. North-east wind. Upper pound 31 mm below marker; lower pound 46 mm below. Greased both paddle spindles. Removed fishing line from bywash grille. Mr Vale called at 16.10 to confirm Wren's passage on Saturday. Said the child would work the lock. No reply required.
15 September. Rain before dawn, 7 mm in gauge. Upper pound recovered 18 mm. Left gate heel leaking at approximately one litre per minute. Packed seal with hemp. Tested twice. Kingfisher on lower rail during second test; remained until gate opened.
16 September. Light west wind. Two hire boats delayed after crew raised opposite paddles together. No damage. Explained procedure. Placed spare windlass on hook in hut, not usual drawer. Weather service gives heavy rain for Saturday.
17 September. Continuous rain from 13.20. Cleared leaves from bywash at 14.05 and 17.40. Upper pound 9 mm above marker at closing. Telephoned Mr Vale. Advised postponement. He said nine locks had been promised. Inspected handrail, ladder and pawls. All serviceable.
18 September. Rain easing; brief sun after 16.00. Upper pound 12 mm above marker on opening. Wren entered at 15.34. Child checked left pawl before winding and opened far paddle one turn when centre rope tightened. Levels equal at 15.46. Mr Vale did not use spare windlass. Wren cleared lower gates 15.49. Brass handle seen in child's hand. Returned spare to drawer. No incidents. One blue cap left on balance beam; collected for Mr Vale.
This passage was written for Revision Library.
- 391 mark
In the entry for 14 September, why does the keeper add 'No reply required' after Mr Vale mentions the child?
- 401 mark
The keeper records that a kingfisher remained on the rail until the gate opened.
Why is this detail especially revealing?
- 411 mark
On 16 September, why is the spare windlass placed on the hut hook rather than in its usual drawer?
- 421 mark
The keeper advises Mr Vale to postpone, then records his reply that 'nine locks had been promised'.
What does the decision to include this reply most strongly imply about the keeper?
- 431 mark
In the final entry, the keeper notes the child's correct actions in much more detail than the boat's ordinary movement.
What is the best explanation for this emphasis?
- 441 mark
Four statements about the water levels are correct. Which one is NOT?
- 451 mark
Which event does NOT occur before Wren enters Lower Mere Lock?
- 461 mark
Which statement about Wren's recorded passage is NOT correct?
- 471 mark
Which jobs in the log are aimed at controlling water flow or preventing obstruction?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 481 mark
Which entries suggest special preparation for Wren's wet-weather passage?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 491 mark
The keeper never states a feeling directly. Which recorded choices nevertheless suggest personal concern for Mr Vale and the child?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 501 mark
The log says the handrail, ladder and pawls are 'serviceable'.
Select the TWO words closest to serviceable in this context.
Select TWO answers.
Section D: Comparing Text 1 and Text 2 (about 10 minutes)
Use both Text 1 and Text 2 to answer questions 51 to 62.
Some questions ask for all the answers that apply. Read the wording carefully.
- 511 mark
Both texts show the child working Walnut Lock. Which details are supported by BOTH accounts?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 521 mark
Each writer makes the weather important to the day's work. Which connections between the texts are accurate?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 531 mark
The texts reveal Grandad's care without relying on long explanations from him. Which details contribute to that picture?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 541 mark
Which features make Text 2 more documentary than Text 1?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 551 mark
Both texts show that safe lock work depends on observing effects, not just following a fixed command. Which evidence supports that shared idea?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 561 mark
Objects carry signs of human touch in both passages. Which examples fit that shared pattern?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 571 mark
Read the texts for what experienced adults choose not to say directly. Which examples support that comparison?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 581 mark
The same successful lock passage serves different purposes in the two texts. Which statements describe that difference accurately?
Select ALL that apply.
Select ALL the answers that are correct.
- 591 mark
Which option most accurately contrasts the way the two texts organise time?
- 601 mark
Which option best describes the contrast in how feeling reaches the reader?
- 611 mark
Text 1 says the gate moves 'as softly as a cupboard door'; Text 2 records, 'Levels equal at 15.46.'
What is the most important difference between these descriptions of success?
- 621 mark
Why is the keeper's logbook an effective companion to the child's account of the same day at the locks?
Answers, mark scheme and worked explanations
- 11 mark
A
Awkward keeps both w letters, one after a and one after k: awk-ward.
B drops the first w, C changes the second a to e, D doubles k, and E doubles the final d.
- 21 mark
B
Bruise has the vowel pair ui and ends in se.
A reverses the vowel sound, C drops the i, D doubles s, and E uses z instead of s.
- 31 mark
D
Curiosity drops the u from curious before adding -ity: curi-os-ity.
A wrongly keeps the u, B drops a syllable, C doubles s, and E uses c where the correct word has s.
- 41 mark
E
Desperate has e in its middle syllable and the ending -ate: des-per-ate.
A changes the middle e to a, B drops that syllable's e, C doubles s, and D changes the a in the ending to e.
- 51 mark
B
Equipped doubles the p before the ending -ed.
A has only one p, C uses the informal sound-based ending -t, D doubles the final d, and E changes i to e and loses a p.
- 61 mark
C
Forty is formed from four, but it drops the u before -ty.
A wrongly keeps the u, B and D use -tee, and E doubles t.
- 71 mark
D
Harass has one r and a double s.
A doubles both r and s, B has only one s, C doubles r but not s, and E adds a final e.
- 81 mark
B
Identity keeps the pattern ident-i-ty.
A changes i to e, C doubles t, D adds an n, and E drops a syllable.
- 91 mark
D
Leisure begins lei- and ends -sure.
A uses ea, B reverses ei, C doubles r, and E drops the final e.
- 101 mark
C
In UK English, marvellous has a double l and the ending -ous.
A has one l, B adds a third l, D has one l and an extra s, and E drops the o from the final syllable.
- 111 mark
B
The narrator has drawn nine squares on their wrist, one for each lock, ready to tick off.
The coins, notebook and passing boats are not mentioned, while the scratch on the windlass was made earlier by Grandma and is a letter, not a count.
- 121 mark
A
The second paragraph places the two actions together: Grandad loops the centre rope round a bollard while the narrator fits the windlass.
Clearing branches happens later at Crow Mill. The other jobs are not described at Mallow Lock.
- 131 mark
C
The paragraph beginning 'The canal threaded' says his boot slips on the last rung and his knuckles strike the wall.
The spinning windlass is an earlier danger, but it never hits him. The hook, branch and rope do not cause the injury.
- 141 mark
D
The narrator checks the pawl, resets the windlass and then leans with their weight.
The far paddle is adjusted later. The narrator neither asks the walkers nor waits for better weather, and no rope adjustment is stated at this moment.
- 151 mark
A
In the final paragraph, rubbing the old windlass reveals a tiny W beside its socket.
The Wren, cap, spare windlass and gate are all connected to the journey but do not carry the scratch.
- 161 mark
C
Every lock still has to fill or empty and reach a safe level. Hurrying the controls cannot skip that process, but it can make ropes snap tight or handles spin.
A, B, D and E all fit parts of a slow canal journey. C alone joins the unchanged process to the danger of rushing, which the Mallow Lock incident later proves.
- 171 mark
A
The narrator's face is already burning. Seeing the cyclist check the time makes a brief safety pause feel painfully public and much longer than it is.
B, C, D and E each contribute to the scene, but A most fully explains why this particular child experiences the ten seconds as stretched.
- 181 mark
A
His question makes the narrator use evidence from the lock instead of guessing what answer Grandad wants. That is what later allows an independent decision at Walnut Lock.
B, C, D and E are also parts of his patient teaching. A is most precise because it identifies the new source of judgement: what the lock itself shows.
- 191 mark
B
At first, success means ticking off locks. After the mistake, the narrator becomes absorbed in reasons, water and rope, so the count matters less than doing the work well.
C and D support that change, E may be a concern, and the ink does blur later. A occurs too late, while only B explains the change in attention and attitude.
- 201 mark
B
The order is revealing: he hides the injury and immediately checks the rope. Safety and the narrator's task come before drawing attention to his pain.
A, C, D and E are plausible parts of his reserve and later decision, but the direct switch to the rope makes B the most precise explanation.
- 211 mark
C
Calling it 'your lock' transfers responsibility. The narrator must read the stiff mechanism, high water, rope and impatient walkers and decide what to do.
A, B, D and E all make the moment possible, but C captures why those two words mark a change in the relationship.
- 221 mark
A
The immediate evidence is the Wren tugging at her rope. That warning shows why the walkers' faster method would risk the boat, so the narrator makes only a smaller adjustment on the far side.
B, C, D and E all support the decision. A is the most precise because Grandad has taught the narrator to let visible evidence settle what to do.
- 231 mark
B
By treating the instruction as normal and boarding, Grandad makes the narrator a fellow worker rather than a beginner completing a display for approval.
A, C, D and E are partly true around the moment. D is the strongest part of his action, but B explains why the absence of praise itself is meaningful.
- 241 mark
C
The delay comes immediately after a quiet gift with family history. Bending over the rope gives Grandad somewhere to look and something to do while the feeling passes.
A and D are true practical details, B may be part of his care, and E fits the day's test. C best explains why the narrator points out that the knot itself did not require the time.
- 251 mark
A and B
The paddle jumps up and the water punches in because the narrator acts forcefully and hastily.
Expertly and patiently contradict the unsafe result. The narrator is embarrassed afterwards, but fearfully does not describe the confident beginning.
- 261 mark
A and B
Folded scissors have sharp angles and rest in a controlled position, making angular and poised the closest descriptions.
The image does not suggest noise or great weight. The bird may blend into the bank, but hidden is not conveyed by scissors.
- 271 mark
A and B
He slows the first mistake without scolding, so he is patient. His repeated 'What tells you that?' questions are probing because they make the narrator explain each judgement.
His experience is never used to boast, and he watches safety carefully. By Walnut Lock he gives up control rather than holding it.
- 281 mark
A and B
The shared counting and the history carried by Grandma's scratched W make the ending affectionate and reflective.
There is no frantic action or bitterness. The narrator has succeeded, but the quiet family memory prevents the mood from being mainly triumphant.
- 291 mark
D
Mallow is the first lock and the Wren continues onwards; the crew do not spend the night there.
Willow Wharf, the railway bridge, Crow Mill's blockage and the chestnut tree at Alder Bend are all stated.
- 301 mark
E
At Walnut Lock the narrator rejects opening both paddles fully because the Wren is already tugging. The correct action depends on what the boat and water show.
A to D are all demonstrated or explained during the journey.
- 311 mark
C
Nothing says that the Wren will be sold. The gift may suggest change, but a specific sale would be an unsupported conclusion.
His greeting at the boatyard, the windlass's history, the hidden bruise and the rusty spare are all in the passage.
- 321 mark
E
No snow falls. The day moves from reflected dawn to heavy rain and then returning sun.
A to D accurately track the sky, rain, high water and wet leaves.
- 331 mark
A and B and D and E
A, B, D and E all show observation replacing haste: reasons are checked, the mechanism is reset, the rope is watched and equal water levels are confirmed.
C is the walkers' unsafe suggestion. The narrator opens only the far paddle by one more turn.
- 341 mark
A and B and C and E
His practical knowledge, silent greeting, well-used tool and the narrator's impression all point to long familiarity with the canal.
The walkers suggest faster paddles; they do not ask Grandad for directions.
- 351 mark
A and C and D
The watch, the request to speed up and the narrator's explicit link between the two moments create the pressure.
The shared umbrella shows rain but not impatience by itself. Mr Devlin does not shout; he and Grandad exchange a silent greeting.
- 361 mark
A and B and C and D
A to D give water or the canal active work: cutting, punching, sparing and polishing.
The spare windlass lives beneath the sink, but the passage never says that it sleeps there.
- 371 mark
A and B and C and D
Wear from Grandad, earlier use and marking by Grandma, and the gift to the next generation make the tool a family object.
The cyclist looks at his watch, not at the windlass.
- 381 mark
A and B and C and E
The failed checklist no longer matters. Nine returns as a relaxed count that Grandad joins simply to share the moment, so A, B, C and E build the change.
The narrator does not redraw the squares.
- 391 mark
B
The child's role is not needed simply to book a passage, yet the keeper writes it down and then shuts off any response. That restraint suggests a reaction is being kept outside the official record.
A, C, D and E are all partly supported by the call and the log's purpose. B most precisely explains why the apparently unnecessary final sentence is included.
- 401 mark
C
The bird is not necessary evidence about the packed seal, yet the keeper makes room for it among millimetres, litres and tests. The choice quietly reveals attention and pleasure without naming either feeling.
A, B, D and E explain why the observation can fit a log. C best explains why its inclusion tells us more about the keeper than the repair requires.
- 411 mark
A
The changed position follows news that a child will work the lock and is reversed only after Wren passes. Making the spare obvious is a quiet act of preparation.
B, C, D and E give sensible reasons for having a spare nearby. A is most precise because it accounts for both the unusual placement and its timing across the entries.
- 421 mark
E
The keeper records the warning but also preserves Mr Vale's human reason in an unusually exact phrase. It suggests understanding without withdrawing the practical advice.
A, B, C and D are all partly true or reasonable inferences. E is most precise because it captures the log's balance between official caution and unspoken sympathy.
- 431 mark
C
Earlier entries prepare a spare and inspect safety equipment after the child is mentioned. The final detailed checklist answers that unspoken concern: the child observes and responds correctly.
A, D and E explain why the actions belong in a log, while B identifies a useful contrast with the hire crews. C best explains why these particular facts receive such careful attention across several days.
- 441 mark
D
On 18 September the upper pound is 12 mm above the marker, not below it.
A and C quote the log, B follows the recorded recovery after rain, and E accurately summarises the overall movement.
- 451 mark
E
The spare is returned to the drawer only after Wren has cleared the gates.
The fishing line, repair, hire boat delay and safety inspection all occur on earlier dates.
- 461 mark
D
The log specifically says Mr Vale did not use the spare windlass.
The entry, pawl check, one-turn adjustment and clearance time are all recorded exactly.
- 471 mark
A and B and C and E
The grille and leaf clearing keep a water channel open, the hemp reduces a leak, and greased spindles allow paddles controlling flow to work.
Collecting the cap is considerate housekeeping but does not control water or remove a blockage.
- 481 mark
A and B and C and D
A to D make tools available, keep overflow clear, communicate risk and check the equipment the crew will use.
The kingfisher is observed during a repair test, but watching it does not prepare for Wren's journey.
- 491 mark
A and B and C and D
The preserved promise, prepared tool, close attention to the child and collected cap all go beyond bare water levels and suggest care through actions.
The rain measurement is useful operational evidence but does not by itself show personal concern for these travellers.
- 501 mark
A and B
Serviceable means fit to be used and working adequately, so usable and functional are closest.
Equipment can be serviceable without being shining or new. Decorative describes appearance or purpose, not whether the safety equipment works.
- 511 mark
A and B and C and E
Text 1 narrates the pawl check, tugging rope, far-paddle adjustment and wait for equal levels. Text 2 records the same four parts in compressed form.
Both texts show that Mr Vale does not take over, and the log expressly says he did not use the spare.
- 521 mark
A and B and C and E
Text 1's overflowing gate and Text 2's measurements make the rain an operational issue, while each notes later sun. A, B, C and E connect those details accurately.
The keeper advises postponement, but Wren still travels, so D is false in both outcome and wording.
- 531 mark
A and B and C and D
Text 1 supplies the protective hand, teaching questions and trusted responsibility. Text 2 adds the remembered promise behind the decision to travel.
Neither text has Grandad ask for an emotional record. The keeper's concern, like his, is implied through practical details.
- 541 mark
A and B and C and D
Dates, measurements, times and compressed status statements are all features of an official working record.
Both speakers use first person and describe witnessed events, so E does not distinguish Text 2's documentary register.
- 551 mark
A and B and C and D
A and B show responsive decisions in Text 1. Repeated testing and repeated clearing in Text 2 show the keeper also checks results and changing conditions.
E is precisely the rigid shortcut the narrator rejects.
- 561 mark
A and B and C and D
Wear and the scratched letter preserve family hands in Text 1. The repaired seal and deliberately moved tool preserve the keeper's practical actions in Text 2.
The kingfisher touches the rail, but the option is not a sign of human touch on an object.
- 571 mark
A and B and C and D
Grandad redirects attention from pain and hides emotion in a task. The keeper closes down comment, yet preparation and close recording reveal concern.
E reverses the shared method: both adults leave important feelings for the reader to infer.
- 581 mark
A and B and C and D
Text 1 turns the work into a personal learning and trust arc. Text 2 verifies the same work through times and actions after days of preparation.
Neither text criticises the child for slowness. Both value care over speed.
- 591 mark
D
Text 1 has a continuous dawn-to-afternoon journey. Text 2 jumps through five dates and pins selected actions to clock times.
The other four options reverse or shrink those clear structures.
- 601 mark
E
The child names a burning face, worry and a shared family moment. The keeper never labels emotion, but choosing to note the bird, promise, spare tool, safe actions and cap lets care show indirectly.
The other four options reverse the registers or reduce each text to only one of its methods.
- 611 mark
B
Text 1 translates correct water balance into a familiar, satisfying sensation. Text 2 preserves only the observable state and clock time expected in a log.
A adds facts the phrases do not prove, while C, D and E misread the purpose or subject of both descriptions.
- 621 mark
C
Text 1 states its lesson out loud: 'It can spare you ten seconds', the questions asked instead of praise, and the burning face after rushing the paddle. Text 2 never uses a word for care, yet the keeper notes the kingfisher, telephones Mr Vale to advise postponement, puts the spare windlass where it can be found, and collects a blue cap from the balance beam. The care is in what he judged worth recording.
A is tempting because Grandad does teach and the keeper does explain procedure to the hire crews, but neither text is written to instruct a reader. B reverses the two registers, since the warmth is in Text 1. D names a genuinely shared subject, but both writers watch the water in order to watch people. E treats one original text as proof of another, when the log is a record and not a check.
Sutton Selective Eligibility Test, Stage 1, English (multiple choice). Written by Revision Library on 2026-08-29, independent check pending.
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